W.A.L.T Create a Trip to a volcano I made mine about a made up name Beauty of the Volcano
would you go here? and why?
p.s everything on there is fake.
Wednesday, 8 September 2021
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Kia ora Paityn,
ReplyDeleteWow! Your advertisement for your volcano is really great. I love that you have used persuasive language with lots of energetic words that make me want to come and see it. It is also great to have an image to support your ad.
I love that you have added that it is fake. I think I would want to go and visit but I would be a little nervous about flying over it. Maybe I'd just want to look at it from a distance, across the lake.
Keep up the great learning and blogging,
:) Sharon - Te Ara Tūhura Education Programme Leader