Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, 22 July 2020
Lion VS Eagle
Would you rather be an Eagle or an Lion?
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Hello Paityn, I like this post because you are telling an argument of what one is better i like all the detail you used and why you would want to be a Eagle then a lion.
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time you could put a WALT and more information in the post.
I would be an Eagle to for the same reasons.
What is stuff you dont like about lions?