Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, 30 April 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Paityn. what drew me into this post is all the bright colours! What you could do next time is you could do a WALT and say why your posting this bike and say what you learnt and add a question so you could start a conversation but otherwise its pretty good blog post. Blog Ya Later :D
ReplyDeleteAmelie ^_^
Hi Paityn Kate here from New Brighton Catholic.I like how you added arrows to point to where everything was. Did you know the first bike was invented in 1817 by German, Baron Karl von Drais. Next time don't forget to put a question. Where is your favourite place to ride your bike?
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