Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, 5 December 2019
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia ora Paityn, this is Kieryn from the Summer Learning Journey.
ReplyDeleteGreat job participating in the Summer Learning Journey teaser week! You have provided us with some awesome facts about Lorde. I didn’t know that she was signed after winning a talent show at school. It’s crazy to think how much her life was changed just by being brave and entering the competition!
I noticed that you used the words aristocracy, epitome and antiquated in your work. Could you please explain to me what these words mean?
It would be great if you could link in the sources where you got your information from.
Quick Tip- Perhaps you could make the image in your post bigger so that it is easier for your viewers to read.
Nga mihi
Hi, my name is Titan from Room 23 at Owairaka. What I really liked about your blog post is that there is lots of information that I didn't know about Lorde. Which song did you like the best?.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your learning with me. You should check out my blog!.
(https://odstitan.blogspot.com/)
Blog you later,
Titan.
Hi,Titan thank you for commenting on my blog post about Lorde,My favourite song about Lorde is green light.
ReplyDeleteI will check out your blog
Thank you bye👋