Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 29 November 2019
1 comment:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Paityn, my name is Taylah and I'm from Owairaka District School. I think your work is pretty cool! The design was pretty, the colours all mixed together was so pretty. Sadly I couldn't read any of your information ): Maybe next time you could make the size of the writing bigger!
ReplyDeleteThank-you for sharing your great learning with us!
-Blog you later...
-Taylah.T <3