Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, 25 September 2019
Friday, 20 September 2019
Wednesday, 18 September 2019
InterLand
We were learning about how to keep Private information to our self.
How to keep emails and text to yourself
My points:125
Friday, 13 September 2019
Thursday, 12 September 2019
Manners
What are Manners for?be kind to others without our world would be a dark place.
When should we use them?everyday
what is one manner I need to work on?pardon\pardon i missed what you said.
Tuesday, 10 September 2019
Monday, 9 September 2019
The Abandoned place
W.A.L.T write a narrative story.
A Narrative writing is about storytelling.Narrative writing is intended to entertain the reader.It can also teach the reader a moral or lesson.
The Abandoned place
Chapter 1: Happy Home
Once upon a time there was a very happy place called the Adoption centre.There were fifty kids and two Adults.
The adults names are Kate and John their the two Teachers. There are also Builders and Policemen and Fire Engines.
It happened on one beautiful day a Monday Morning Kate and Mia (A little girl five years old.) They were playing in the backyard when the ground started to shake.
Chapter 2: Disaster!!!
Everybody had to run outside to get away from the tornado with John. (Except for Mia and Kate they were already outside.)
But some of the kids (about 20 of them) tripped over and got sucked up into the tornado.Everyone was so worried and scared. the adults were helping them to escape.
Chapter 3:Safe At Last
Kate calls 1 1 1 the police comes gets everyone behind a big wall the fire engine gets a match and light the tornado.
The police calls the builders they found another place the builders made a new home for them to stay in.
Chapter 4:Creepy Shadows
Did you know that building that was hit by the tornado is still there if you are under 8 STOP READING!
I will tell you scary bit of the story it all happened on one stormy Sunday night in the Abandoned house.
I didn't tell you about mirror in the kids room but when i was cleaning the mirror pieces(I do house cleaning.)
When a huge shine of light came out of the mirror I ran into the lounge.
This ghost 2 feet off the ground black hair with little pony tales she keeps on saying this: mama.
She had a little brown bear which looks like the one I gave rosey (She was only five she died of the tornado.)
She was wearing a black dress blood on the dress she went into the kitchen I went into kates old room she came back with a knife.
She went into kate's room where i was hiding. How she know I was there? THEN!
She found me there was nowhere to go. behind me there was a window I jumped out the window run back to the new house.
when I walked through the door I saw photos of HER THE GHOST on the wall.
So if you see a little girl black hair her hair in ponytails back dress with blood on it do not let her go into the kitchen. :)
A Narrative writing is about storytelling.Narrative writing is intended to entertain the reader.It can also teach the reader a moral or lesson.
The Abandoned place
Chapter 1: Happy Home
Once upon a time there was a very happy place called the Adoption centre.There were fifty kids and two Adults.
The adults names are Kate and John their the two Teachers. There are also Builders and Policemen and Fire Engines.
It happened on one beautiful day a Monday Morning Kate and Mia (A little girl five years old.) They were playing in the backyard when the ground started to shake.
Chapter 2: Disaster!!!
Everybody had to run outside to get away from the tornado with John. (Except for Mia and Kate they were already outside.)
But some of the kids (about 20 of them) tripped over and got sucked up into the tornado.Everyone was so worried and scared. the adults were helping them to escape.
Chapter 3:Safe At Last
Kate calls 1 1 1 the police comes gets everyone behind a big wall the fire engine gets a match and light the tornado.
The police calls the builders they found another place the builders made a new home for them to stay in.
Chapter 4:Creepy Shadows
Did you know that building that was hit by the tornado is still there if you are under 8 STOP READING!
I will tell you scary bit of the story it all happened on one stormy Sunday night in the Abandoned house.
I didn't tell you about mirror in the kids room but when i was cleaning the mirror pieces(I do house cleaning.)
When a huge shine of light came out of the mirror I ran into the lounge.
This ghost 2 feet off the ground black hair with little pony tales she keeps on saying this: mama.
She had a little brown bear which looks like the one I gave rosey (She was only five she died of the tornado.)
She was wearing a black dress blood on the dress she went into the kitchen I went into kates old room she came back with a knife.
She went into kate's room where i was hiding. How she know I was there? THEN!
She found me there was nowhere to go. behind me there was a window I jumped out the window run back to the new house.
when I walked through the door I saw photos of HER THE GHOST on the wall.
So if you see a little girl black hair her hair in ponytails back dress with blood on it do not let her go into the kitchen. :)
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